To the Student

Once a week each student is invited to write one entry. The topic is of your choice, but should be meaningful and respecting ethical values.
Did you have a good or bad day at school? Write about it. If you don't want to write about yourself, write about a rainy day, the streets of Istanbul or a famous person. These are just examples, of course. Feel free to express yourself!

Monday, November 19, 2007

General Feedback 1

All of your blog posts are important contributions for our class to improve in writing. THANK YOU! Your posts show your instructor that you are interested in the subject and this will certainly affect your participation mark positively.

Reading through your posts I noticed some nasty PhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhoneticPhonetic (bad, unpleasant) mistakes:
  1. Capitalization at the beginning of a sentence
  2. Use of present and past participle "shopping makes me feel relaxed", "shopping is relaxing"
  3. Use of articles
  4. Missing verbs in sentences!
  5. Uses of like: "I like to buy a car", "I like eating fish"!
My advise: always read and edit your writings carefully.
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1 comment:

TrustMe said...

thank you! I will avoid to make mistakes.

November 19, 2007 at 11:42 PM

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